Macht ich liebe sie
Strolling through thick woods, I found some thing
delighted I was, my heart began to sing,
Something long forgotten, lay infront of me
I came that way many a times, may be my eyes had refused to see.
And I stood there, waiting for someone to approve
Not sure whether or not I was smart in making a move
I shouted aloud, what was to be done,
Stupid i felt, realising there was none,
To help me, there was only one,
I must listen to my heart, if the battle is to be won.
6 Comments:
as u might have guessed ..its a poem :D
poem is great, but did u cog it from somewhere or is it your own?
if it is u r own, i appreciate your talent, if not , u get"the plagiarist" award of the year.
I accpet ur appreciation my friend .. genuinely mine ... could do with a critic though ...
Very nice , buddy . Simple and conveys the point . Keep writing . :)
thanks macha
wow GT .. I did not know u could say something that positive... thanks :)
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